1. YoungflamesG Said,

   this beat is nice
   good job

2. GattlingGuitarGuru Said,

   That’s what I get for comin’ here
   To live out this stupid fear
   And I was so near
   To a catastrophe with all these tears
   Rollin’ on and down my face
   I felt like such a disgrace
   How did I get to be so out of place?
   I was struck and put in a daze….

3. rmm3586 Said,

   A.j-512- Im tierd of that rain im tierd of that pain im tierd of them same old things, Same old things, That i go threw everyday in my life somtimes i wonder if im even alright even alive im checkin 4 bruises and scars feels like im going threw war im feeling agravated and stresd MAN i kant handle Nomore,its time 4 me to Make a Change and get out da game man dis 4 my cuzn jesse aka young1 stay real cuz and stay strong even when im gone im still herei always got yur bak, ATX-A.j-512

4. MiniThug2 Said,

   nee vriend je moet nog beetj lerenXD,, wat vind je van mij stukje dan?

5. denniemannie Said,

   ik ben bedoeld om te shinen, niemand voelt wat ik voel,
   ik word behandeld als speelgoed, ik doe nix goed.
   ik heb genoeg van me huis, want me pa trapt me deur in
   ik stap naar me afedelingleider van school; mohring
   toen ik geboren werd, zal alles me nog mee.
   maar als ik nu de keus had, was ik neit geboren nee
   ik mocht niet eten, ik mocht mathafacking nix,
   ik zat alleen te staren. en nu spit ik alleen maar shit

   Nederlandse rap ownt, alleen dat van mij niet xD

6. MiniThug2 Said,

   Ik zit hier in staat om mezelf neer te gaan schieten,, al die verdriet en al die pijn,, zeg me goed jah hoe kon het zow zijn.. ik kwam op de wereld en zag alles als een paradijs,, achteraf gezien zal alles anders moeten zijn, want kijk is om je heen alles wat je ziet is pijn,, daarvoor ben ik niet gekomen en daarvoor zal ik niet blijven.. ik zal al de pijn van me af moeten schrijven,, bewapend met een pen zet ik de aanval in.. hoezo geen oorlog?, nee ik zit er middenin.

7. fatballzd Said,

   contd

   They tell me take deep breaths but nigguh it hurts breathin
   When my flash before I wan It to be worth seein
   But at the same time I dont kno why I try
   Common sense said ull never get out of life alive

8. fatballzd Said,

   Dream as if ull live for ever live as if ull die today
   Die as if u lived for ever, but then who am I to say
   I wish I could see the sun cuz nigguh im tired of rain
   But the block is hot somaybe itl dry away,
   Im out here by my self n Im jus tryna find away..
   Ive been like this since I was born I dont wanna die this way
   Wanna change my ways Wanna say that im okay
   But I never been a lier I dont wanna strt today

9. PimpDaddyYoshi Said,

   So i thought we were perfect but i guessed wrong
   and now you’ve sitting here writing a song
   and it was a nightmare when you left me
   its was like a punch to the heart that was swiftly
   you were the only one i ever loved
   and when we hugged it was the best
   and all i said was fuck the rest
   but now i’ve gotten in a mess
   without you i have no direction
   and i thought our love was perfection
   WHY DID YOU LEAVE

10. DimBoy94 Said,

    I don´t know how time past by, without having you by my side,
    thinking of you day and night I need light
    to destroy the darkness in my soul,
    my whole life collapses, thinking getting old,
    without you,
    now I´m looking in the mirror and I see you,
    and I feel you – put your hand on my ceek and grining too
    I have the feeling I´m winning a few moments with you,
    have no clue, what it means to have you,
    These could be the last we will ever have
    I say how it is dad I love you till death

11. Barfdude Said,

    real nice, how long did this take you?

12. CyCheeseRoll Said,

    google it, FL studio

13. Matstoen Said,

    R u only 12? :O WOW, U got SKILLS!

14. ShizzleCrizzle Said,

    nice beat man! and ur 12?? Damn.. u got skills. Check out my beats too

15. mrkickassss Said,

    nice beat man..

    -D-dog

16. PDrizzle4shizzle Said,

    Mad Props! great beat! amazing piano! 5/5! check out some of mine if you please!

17. sgraffito99 Said,

    “hohoops crew” may i borrow dis beat bro

18. sgraffito99 Said,

    may i borrow ur beat beat bro 4 our underground sound music…we dont have financial to buy beat maker to make an original beat of our…thankx 4 making beats and sharing ,,,,,representing philippines ……”"”"”"‘hohoops crew”"”"”

19. olivia123445 Said,

    this is really goood

20. bullchim Said,

    thaths soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice )

21. lilriz4592 Said,

    yo u should let me borrow this please

22. charruo55 Said,

    Fruityloops cherche sur google tu trouvera

23. charlyspeed61 Said,

    What is the name of this software please I can not find it in France

24. bunnyxmahgii Said,

    Nice talent for a 12 year old. xD

25. phillipvinten Said,

    yo this is a true story goes out to my buddy lil pete

    yo it started when it was just you and me. you became my best buddyy. man i can’t believe that you are’nt here with me all the things that you did’nt see and your daughter little tee she miss u and wife is very wise she’ve been very nice to your mom that di’dnt move on it took so long for me to move on cu’z suddently you where gone dead by the gun
    R.I.P LIL’ PETE
    TRUE STORY

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