1. BigVinno Said,

   make the 4th line rhyme with the 2nd line, then it’ll sound better. My opinion. But rapping is all about personality. Your style, your rhythm and rhyme, your choise.
   Keep it up ‘n’ you’ll do fine!

2. 1963impalass409 Said,

   bad choice of beat

3. AZtrueflow18 Said,

   people be wanting me to pick a faster beat, i can’t rap fast so im doing my own thing

4. DaimRaw Said,

   you are rapper then check out my beats on my channel!!!peace

5. poast Said,

   I see rap as an extra lead instrument. It needs to be part of the song not a beat with rap on top. That’s how most producers do it though, i really dislike it. it’s better to have a whole song then the 1000st mc on the 50.0000.000st beat.

6. quentinrichard Said,

   remove the last be on your 4th line so it rhymes with your 3rd one .

   and by the way , I like it

7. mehthekitteh Said,

   you got the key to my heart but i got to make a fresh start
   i tried to make our love stronger but i cant wait any longer
   i know what i have to do and baby i cant be with you
   so stop obsession with me i got to be who i want to be.
   its my first rap song

8. DopeSoundProductions Said,

   @zipmouth619 His Name Is JellyRoll, Freestyle Battle Rap Champion And Accomplished Artist.

9. rossoneroedoboi Said,

   yo check my rap song out

   need sme feedback

   safee

   CHECK IT

10. zipmouth619 Said,

    wats his name?

11. gatler05 Said,

    Just get the beat you think sounds right, as simple as that. No need for some bull shit.

12. Karmaggedon Said,

    Dude…are you fucking retarded? That dude is one of the SICKEST freestylers and rappers on EARTH…He’s already got like 4 CD’s out and been on TONS of other shit.

    check the name Jellyroll. Dude is one of the CWB Originals!

13. GoofyBoa Said,

    motha fucka, he atleast making videos trying to fuckin help people, i dont see your monkey ass making tutorials spreading the knowledge! let this dude help the world a bit and you just shut your fucking mouth.

14. abacvanin Said,

    dude ur probs the shitest rapper int ehf cuking world
    get some balls
    and make ur own vid
    smartass

15. abacvanin Said,

    50s ight man
    he has his moments
    but now hes gone comercial
    all for money bro
    all for money

16. EmceeDraco Said,

    I gotta say u hand ur hand in helping me. Thanx. But u do think 50 cent is some trash…I mean sure hes sold his copys but he has no substance. Check my video respond comment.

17. Bedazzler16 Said,

    This guy knows what he’s saying. You gotta pick a beat tht’s good, but not own you, u should own it

18. adamaboelmatty Said,

    very explanitory

19. filosophy42 Said,

    damm picking a beat takes me the longest out of everything, peep some tracks if your interested

20. locogrande213 Said,

    man juss learn dont hate dam

21. TheLukiieBoii Said,

    Yeahh thanxx mann .

22. Richinho13 Said,

    i totally agree with u, this guys a genius

23. TheLukiieBoii Said,

    Im sick of mother fuckers sayin this guy is a dumass, this guys obviously know’s what the fuck he’s talkin about, so if you think he’s talkin shit, get the fuck outta hear, and get some advice for a cheap ass rapper like lil wayne.

24. frustumist Said,

    fat ass-tronomical

25. BobtheEgg Said,

    wow, love the beat at the end..

    think you could hook me up with it?

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